Monday, March 13, 2017

fiction - How much information should a narrative sentence contain ,from experience on average, for good readability?


While randomly browsing, i noticed fiction writings contain much more comas in their sentences as lets say sentences in chats or instruction leaflets.


just for contrast




  • simple sentence: i live in mülheim.





  • complex sentence: I live, if it is not a misleading expression, in a town, known as mülheim to the outsiders, a world of its own, freed from the logic of the known reality found on paper and within sane mens wiring, where fountains paint stars at night, and drunk women become reborn virgins in the morning






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