I wrote a short story (900-1000 words) about a character presenting some election process and at the end, we learn that
he got elected.
The problem that I have is that the suspense in that story lasts about as long as you needed to hover over the spoiler part.
For the future, I am wondering what techniques I could use to keep the conclusion somewhat a surprise, or at least make it less certain?
I thought about adding some red herrings, but due to the length of the story, it isn't very simple without losing myself.
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