In other words, is it correct to write something like this:
"Oh," he laughed. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today."
(Every time I see something like this, I think: "How is this peson laughing an talking at the same time? But other times seems OK for me. Strange.)
as an shorter version of this?
"Oh," he said with a laugh. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today."
"Oh," he said laughing. "Sorry, I'm not sure what's with me today."
Other example:
"OK," she said with a sigh. "Just this time."
"OK," she said, sighing. "Just this time."
"OK," she sighed. "Just this time."
Because I've noticed by dialogues are cluttering with "withs" all of the sudden.
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