Sunday, August 4, 2019

creative writing - Prologues with no protagonist - How can they work?


It is my understanding that novels should generally start right off with the protagonist. The story is about the protagonist, after all, not something else (This obviously changes a bit if the PoV is not the protagonist, but that is beside the point). It is also my understanding (through experience as well as being informed) that too much telling will generally bore the reader, while showing will not. This is also beside the point, however.


I recently started to re-read Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's (Philosopher's) Stone. Imagine my surprise and confusion, when I discovered that the first chapter barely contained Harry at all. He shows up in the last two pages, but was only a 1-year-old sleeping baby. My confusion deepened as I realized that the first half of the chapter was almost pure telling.


Harry Potter was clearly successful. This means that a book clearly does not need to open with the protagonist. My question is this: Was J. K. Rowling one of those authors who knew how to write an exception to 'the rules?' Or is my above assumption (that you need to start with the protagonist) wrong? And if it is, why is it, and how can you be successful when you do not start with the protagonist?


Note: I realize that no writing 'rules' are set in stone, and that there are likely exceptions to many (if not all) of them. Some authors know how to bypass the rules, but most do not. At least such is my understanding.




Answer



If you read any Dan Brown books (Da Vinci Code, Angels & Demons etc.), he generally writes a prologue where the main character (of the prologue) is actually the victim of the murder that the protagonist investigates throughout the rest of the book.


There are many more authors than just J.K. Rowling who are accomplished and have managed this feat.


That being said, some of the prologues to his books are incredibly confusing, but are mercifully short.


Prologues are generally reserved for being detached from the main narrative, so even having them from a different character's point of view who is never met again is acceptable.


They can also be used for exposition that could not be worked into chapter 1, or that are needed before the beginning of chapter 1.


If you take Harry Potter as an example, the prologue establishes that it is set in a world with wizards, flying motorcycles, and a boy who is fated to do great things.


If it didn't have the prologue, it would be around chapter 4 (Not 100% on that) that the reader is even aware that wizards exist, never mind that the protagonist is one, and would be incredibly bored before then (this of course is based on the assumption the reader has lived under a rock for the last 15 years and has never heard of Harry Potter).


So as for the writing 'rules' that you mentioned, you can probably throw most of them out of the window for the prologue in relation to the rest of the story. You can have different characters, settings, time period, POV, and other things that are entirely different from the main narrative.


As long as it does its job, which is to set up the story, it can be a good prologue.



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